Monday, January 16, 2012

Corrections to English - Spanish Translation,?

My church is having a rummage sale here in the Chicago area. Would you please suggest corrections to the following Spanish translation that reflect standard, good Spanish usage? I have posted my translation, then the English I am translating. The proceeds will go to various charities.



Guardar estas fechas



venta de busqueda a

Iglesia Kenilworth Union

211 Kenilworth Avenue

Kenilworth, IL 60043



D铆a de Venta: S谩bado, 25 de julio, 2009 7 AM - 3 PM



D铆a de pre Premium Marcado con un 50%



Jueves, 23 de julio de 2009 9 am - Mediod铆a



Direcciones a la Iglesia Kenilworth Union, situado entre Sheridan Road y Green Bay Road en la Avenida Kenilworth en Kenilworth, IL.



211 Kenilworth Avenue est谩 en el lado norte de la calle.



De Chicago en la I-94: Tome la salida Lake Avenue East a Green Bay Road, cerca de 3 millas. Gire a la izquierda en Green Bay Road para la pr贸xima vista, Kenilworth Avenue. Gire a la derecha en Kenilworth Avenue hasta 211 Kenilworth Avenue.



Metra: Union Pacific North Line, deja a Kenilworth. Camine 4 cuadras al este a la iglesia.



THIS IS THE ENGLISH:

Save these dates



Rummage Sale



AT

Kenilworth Union Church

211 Kenilworth Avenue

Kenilworth, IL 60043



Day of Sale:



Saturday, July 25, 2009 7 AM - 3 PM



Day of Premium Presale

With 50% Markup



Thursday, July 23, 2009 9 AM - Noon



Directions to Kenilworth Union Church

Located between Sheridan Road and Green Bay Road on Kenilworth Avenue in Kenilworth, IL.



211 Kenilworth Avenue is on the North Side of the Street.



From Chicago on I-94: Take the Lake Avenue East Exit to Green Bay Road, almost 3 miles. Turn Left on Green Bay to the next traffic light, Kenilworth Avenue. Turn Right on Kenilworth Avenue until 211 Kenilworth Avenue.



Metra: Union Pacific North Line to Kenilworth stop. Walk 4 Blocks EAST to the church.Corrections to English - Spanish Translation,?
it's perfect.Corrections to English - Spanish Translation,?
Marque estas fechas



venta de busqueda a

Iglesia Kenilworth Union

211 Kenilworth Avenue

Kenilworth, IL 60043



D铆a de Venta: S谩bado, 25 de julio, 2009 7 AM - 3 PM



D铆a de pre Premium Marcado con un 50% de descuento



Jueves, 23 de julio de 2009 9 am - Mediod铆a



Direcciones a la Iglesia Kenilworth Union, situado entre Sheridan Road y Green Bay Road en la Avenida Kenilworth en Kenilworth, IL.



211 Kenilworth Avenue est谩 en el lado norte de la calle.



De Chicago en la I-94: Tome la salida Lake Avenue East a Green Bay Road, cerca de 3 millas. Vuelta a la izquierda en Green Bay Road para la pr贸xima vista, Kenilworth Avenue. Vuelta a la derecha en Kenilworth Avenue hasta 211 Kenilworth Avenue.



Metro: Union Pacific North Line, baje en Kenilworth. Camine 4 cuadras al este a la iglesia.





I made only a couple of corrections because the words you were using are not the ones that real people use. Other than that you did great!! Good luck with your sale! :)Corrections to English - Spanish Translation,?
Hi,

Excellent translation; suggest you add a phone number in case they have questions. Make sure whoever answers knows Spanish should the need arise. Best Wishes!

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